Corrected entry: Does the Inquisitor have the authority to tell the keeper of the Matrix to take anything he needs to repair the Matrix? And if anarchy has broken out on Gallifrey, why would its repairs take priority?
Corrected entry: The first time the 2nd Mr. Popplewick refers to the 1st Mr. Popplewick, he calls him the 'Very Junior Mr. Popplewick'. Then, for the rest of the scene he is simply referred to as the 'Junior', not the 'Very Junior'. Then the 2nd one refers to himself as a SENIOR clerk, implying there are two of them. So why say the 'Very Junior'?
Corrected entry: The Doctor states that Gallifrey has no crown jewels, but here are a few items we have seen: 1 - The sash of Rassilon 2 - The staff of Rassilon 3 - The crown that gives the President access to the Matrix. 4 - The coronet of Rassilon (although this may have been lost.).
Corrected entry: In episode 13, Glitz refers to the bronze coloured metal that decorates the court room as Maconite, saying it is very valuable. But in episode 14, he refers to a Maconite overcoat, meaning a form of restraint. The question is, why would you make straight jackets out of valuable metals?