Funeral at Fifty-Mile - S1-E22
Other mistake: It's a clear day not a stormy night as it should be when showing the barn in the flashback. Look closely and you can see a clear sky through the barn walls cracks.
Funeral at Fifty-Mile - S1-E22
Other mistake: In the end credits, Jesús is misspelled Hay-Soos, phonetically.





Answer: At the start, Edward told Jessica that he loved the changes she'd made to her new book. Later, as his mental condition declined, he said the book was terrible and he wouldn't publish it until she made improvements. Edward's later note to Jessica was to apologise for saying her novel was bad and that he had been right about it the first time.
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