Continuity mistake: While Cissy and Jessica discuss inside the tennis club, a man with a blue shirt walks behind Jessica. From the opposite angle, he's metres behind, entering the place again, though he now exits through the left.
Continuity mistake: At Elliot's office, Carol discusses with Cissy, whose arms swap between crossed or not depending on the shot.
Answer: At the start, Edward told Jessica that he loved the changes she'd made to her new book. Later, as his mental condition declined, he said the book was terrible and he wouldn't publish it until she made improvements. Edward's later note to Jessica was to apologise for saying her novel was bad and that he had been right about it the first time.
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