Corrected entry: Nurse Wilson puts Dorothy into a room with a bed. After she says "You may have a nap if you wish," she leaves. Dorothy looks around the room for a while and when Dorothy looks out the door, Nurse Wilson has just gotten to the end of the hall. The hall is not very long and Nurse Wilson is not walking at a slow enough pace to have just reached the end of the hall. She should have already gotten past the end of the hall when Dorothy looks out.
Corrected entry: When Dorothy goes to steal the key from around Mombi's wrist while she is sleeping, we can only see Mombi's hand and arm but we can hear her snoring and snuffling. When Dorothy has taken the key and is noticed by the heads in the chamber they start to scream, awaking Mombi. When Mombi arises and starts to chase Dorothy she has no head, as all of her heads are in the glass cases, so why were we hearing snoring that suggested it was coming from under the covers?