Corrected entry: Hanzo kills the second predator with his samurai, then dies himself from his wounds in battle. When this happens, his human partners are already long gone, running away towards the predators camp. They do not know about the outcome of the battle between Hanzo and the second predator, having not witnessed the battle. Later, when the third predator is killed, the two surviving humans act as if they have finally prevailed over the three predators. How could they know that the second predator is dead? More troubling, since Hanzo never shows up, they should at least be worried that the second predator might still be alive and hunting them.
Corrected entry: If Brody's clay-mask makes him colder, he should appear as a dark blue silhouette against the flames and not be concealed within them.
Corrected entry: The newly formed crew begin trekking through the area and arrive at cliff where they look up to see several planets/moons. - At any point in time, they could have seen this if they looked up. A cliff would only provide a view of something below their current horizon, and should not reveal anything new above the horizon.