ENF Novels: Dress Code

3 character mistakes - chronological order

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Character mistake: During Megan's first humiliation scene, she internally monologues saying "I can't believe it, he's offering me a promotion." The problem is that the "he" she refers to is Brigitte.

Sammo

Character mistake: During a sarcastic comment in the final days, Linda mentions "an action figure of Dr. Manhattan, a naked patch for the sims", with no capitalization - she meant The Sims, as in the game.

Sammo

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