Revealing mistake: When the protagonist is in the school library, the shelves have always the same few textbooks with easily readable titles spammed all over the place. Using generic nameless books would have avoided the problem easily, this way it is obvious to the point of being distracting.
Revealing mistake: When the protagonist is in the school library, the shelves have always the same few textbooks with easily readable titles spammed all over the place. Using generic nameless books would have avoided the problem easily, this way it is obvious to the point of being distracting.
