Continuity mistake: In chapter 9, Fireheart takes Cinderpaw to see the Thunderpath. He asks her if she can smell anything apart from the monsters, she replies that she can smell shadowclan because she smelt the same scent on the kits that were taken: 'I remember that scent from when brokenstar attacked our camp. And it was on the kits he took'. But if you read the paragraph about finding the kits in shadowclan (very end of chapter 24 in Into the Wild) it says that "the last one was grey, like the embers of an old fire" and that she is a girl. The description sounds like Cinderpaw, and she is one of Frostfur's kits (like the ones who were taken), which means Cinderpaw was taken but says the scent was on the ones he took, meaning she wasn't one.
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