Plot hole: Book III - Chapter 6 - Inside the Ship. When Gard and Bobbi go out to the ship to enter the hatch for the first time, a big deal is made about how they both need to go into the hole at the same time. Bobbi even makes a show out of calling in one of her inventions to operate the controls so they can both go down together. However, once the machine gets there and operates the controls, Gard and Bobbi go into the hole separately. This makes no sense. Gard already knew that Bobbi was far into the "becoming" so there is no need for her to demonstrate her powers like this.
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