Corrected entry: Adeline's condition occurred years after she had ended her relationship with William, since her accident occurred after her husband had died and her daughter was a child. The story incorrectly indicates that she left young William because of her condition. However, she didn't have the condition yet. The age of her daughter compared to the age of William's children is drastically unrealistic, as well.
Corrected entry: Ellis says he'll take Jenny out to dinner tomorrow. When they meet, he shows her the remains of a buried ship from the gold rush days. Then, when Ellis says they should eat, Jenny says she can't because she only gets an hour for lunch. Lunch? What happened to dinner?
Correction: Ellis didn't ask Jenny for dinner, he asked to take her out tomorrow, to somewhere she had never been before; and that was during the day - lunchtime. But, to be fair, we didn't know it was lunch until Jenny said she only got an hour for lunch and all that time had been taken up, seeing the boat.
Correction: Her condition happened in 1937, before she met William in the 1960s.